Thursday, October 9, 2014

What Is Your Premise?


"What is the premise of your story?" asked the old professor. He was not particularly gentle in his tone and I was already frustrated about the assignment.

I glared at him.

"If I knew the answer, you wouldn't have to ask, would you?" I knew my reply was snippy so I modified a bit. "How do I find a premise?" I said. "I mean, what should it be?"

"That is for you to discover. You are the one writing this piece," he said.  "Look, if you can't state a premise, make one up, better yet, make ten up and pick one - just do it."

"Okay, how about this? A middle aged woman takes a course in memoir writing to write her mother's stories and finds, and finds ...and finds... I don't know what I'll find. How can I make that up?"

"Who is your story about?" he inquired, not waiting for my reply. 

"What is his or her motivation or desire?''

I started writing these questions in my spiral notebook. 

"What is stopping your protagonist from accomplishing her goal? 

"What does she learn?"

"Answer these questions and you'll have your premise." This statement definitely sounded like an invitation to exit his office. 

So I did.

 ~~~~~

Who is my story about?
 
 Me / My Mom (two stories)
What is my motivation or desire? 
To write about my mother's life
 What is stopping you from your goal? Talent, knowledge of how to go about it. Distance from where my mother lives.
What does she learn? 
How to collect and write the stories from the previous generation in order to pass on the lessons of the past.
Premise: When Becky attempts to write about her mother's life, she struggles with a way to approach and structure the story. She ends up writing a story about how she went about it.

 ~~~

Memoir Notes: The anatomy of a premise:
"[When] some event sparks a character to action, that [character acts] with deliberate purpose [until] that action is opposed by an external force, [leading to] some conclusion." 





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4 comments:

  1. Your work inspires me and brings out new memories for me work on. I really had to check my own Premise.

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    1. This comment made my day! Thank you for taking the time write it.

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  2. Very informative... I like your perspective and approach to 'PREMISE'
    and have to say, I chuckled at "When Becky attempts to write..."
    very funny. I think you're doing exceptionally well!

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